I have a good plan for this weekend.

Actually, I bought three concert tickets for this coming Sunday evening, and will go to enjoy the music with my parents. It will be performed by a String Quartet group from Denmark, called Nightingale.

Since I am learning to play the piano and am a classical music fan, I cannot wait any longer for this musical activity this weekend. It would be brilliant, if today were Sunday.

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I have a good plan for this weekend. Actually, I bought three concert tickets for this coming Sunday evening, and I will enjoy the music with my parents. It will be performed by a String Quartet from Denmark, called Nightingale. Since I have learned to play the piano and am a classical music fan, I cannot wait any longer for this musical activity this weekend. It would be brilliant, if today were Sunday.

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　　二年級:哲軒

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